Fair Go Finance
Fair Go Finance understands that finance can be overwhelming. So, in addition to developing their USPs and website copy, they came to me to write Spotify ad scripts as a way to showcase how straightforward personal loans can be.
The brief
Fair Go Finance wanted to communicate the ease and accessibility of their personal loans process. They came to me for messaging, tone of voice development, website copy and Spotify script writing
The audience
Gen X families with children, average income
The voice
Down-to-earth, guiding and pioneering
Tone of Voice
Down-to-earth
accessible, casual, understated, good-natured, collaborative, genuine
We understand that finance can be overwhelming. That's why we keep it simple – no jargon, no cliches and never condescending. And because we want everyone to feel welcome at Fair Go Finance, we talk like real people, person to person.
We do all this by using short sentences, minimal punctuation and contractions. We choose straightforward language and occasionally start sentences with conjunctions. We don’t use sentence fragments to sound ‘punchy’.
This looks like:
Short sentences: Sentences should comprise fewer than 30 words on average.
Minimal punctuation: Avoid Oxford commas, semicolons and ellipses.
Contractions: Use natural contractions, such as let’s, there’s, it’s etc.
Straightforward language: Use the simplest word to convey meaning. For example, while instead of whilst, among instead of amongst, quick instead of swiftly.
Start sentences with conjunctions: These include but, and, so etc.
No ‘punchy’ sentence fragments: Use full sentences, not single word sentences like Fast. Personalised. Finance.
Guiding
fair, inclusive, compassionate, non-judgemental, helpful, empowering, trustworthy
Helpful, fair and empowering, we’re our customers’ friendly guide through the ups and downs of life. We know our stuff, and they can trust us to answer their questions with compassion and without judgement. We’re here to lend a hand – never overfamiliar but always in their corner.
We show this this by avoiding ‘salesy’ or overly informal language, emphatic punctuation and inappropriate colloquialisms. We never make promises we can’t keep, and we always put the power in our customers’ hands.
This looks like:
‘Salesy’ language: For example, This is a limited-time offer that you can't afford to miss! Let the benefits of the product and service speak for themselves.
Overly informal language: We don’t use slang, informal adjectives or incorrect spelling or grammar. For example, Grab this sweet deal now! It's totally awesome, and you won't wanna miss it.
Emphatic punctuation: Avoid exclamation marks, ellipses and too many question marks.
Inappropriate colloquialisms: Avoid excessive Australianisms and phrases like Let's crunch the numbers. An exception is referring to friends as mates.
No false promises: Never use absolute claims that can’t be guaranteed. For example a debt-free life is just a loan away!
Pioneering
trailblazing, leading, innovative, driven, fresh, inspiring
Beneath our down-to-earth exterior is a vibrant, pioneering spirit. It’s one that makes us natural leaders in the industry, constantly innovating to make sure we’re doing what’s best for our customers. We’re more likely to build a new path than follow an old one, and we do it all with a contagious enthusiasm.
We get people on board with a tone that’s confidently optimistic, even when we’re tackling complex topics. We're not afraid to introduce new terms or concepts, as long as they help our customers’ understanding.
USP Development
Genuine customer service
Our genuine, down-to-earth team is here for friendly, helpful advice – and zero jargon.
Check if you qualify
Learn how likely you are to get approved, with no impact on your credit file.
Personalised pricing
We get to know your situation to craft a tailored rate just for you.
Stress-free pre-approval
Understand your borrowing potential, interest rate and repayments upfront.
Credit score boost
Make timely repayments on an initial easy-to-manage loan to actively boost your credit score.
Mates rates
Enjoy faster processing, rate reductions and more when you come back to us.
Spotify Scripts
Car loans
Car troubles slowing you down? Fair Go Finance’s personalised car repair loans are here to help get you back on the road.
See if you’re eligible to access to up to $10,000 to put towards fixing your vehicle at fairgofinance.com.au. The best bit? Our checks won’t impact your credit score.
Fair Go Finance – we’re with you on this ride.
Personal loans
Need some help through life’s ups and downs? At Fair Go Finance, we’re proud that our personal loans feel, well, personal. You’ll get a tailor-made rate based on your credit score, terms that work and friendly service from genuine human beings.
Check if you’re eligible with no impact to your credit score at fairgofinance.com.au.
Fair Go Finance – we’re with you when you need a hand.
Debt consolidation loans
Juggling loan repayments? Catch your breath and consolidate your debts with Fair Go Finance. You’ll get one simple loan tailored to your situation, and you can even boost your credit score when you pay it back on time. Win-win.
Head to fairgofinance.com.au to check if you’re eligible, with no impact on your credit score.
Fair Go Finance – we’re with you, making life a little easier.
